(Written
in First Person from A Native)
In The Days Gone By
“The wind slowly began to pick up as I looked deep into the dark blue
liquid. There was something out there, it was noticeable. Brown and tall, with
white sheets that extended into the skies. There was more of these oddly shaped
things dancing through the waves. After some minutes of watching these things
walk on water I watched as they breached the land. A large silver object dove
into the water as men began jumping off the ship screaming in what I assume is
happiness, "Land!" That's what they said and, "We found
it!" But how is it possible to find something you could never lose. My group
approached these individuals who had enough clothing to dress the entire tribe
and the neighboring. We welcomed them as they set lustful eyes on our golden
bracelets and jewelry. Those same eyes were full of anger, disgust, and none of
us knew why. But that didn’t stop us from sheltering them. Our mistake.
You see they
started off nice like us. They traded our bracelets for odd tools they called
spoon and forks. We taught them how to fish grow food and build houses. And in
return, they granted us hell. Yes they said we were invaders of the land; not
worthy of it. The called us disrespectful and morally wrong. They soon began to
take over with these large things that shot round things at us. Soon we began
getting sick of things the called spirits. Demons. But the way that description
of demons made us believe that they were its true form. And they were. They
invaded us, took our help and hospitality and like these ‘devils’ they turned
us into weak beings. Striping us from our gods and damming us to worship a
single creature with the ability to everything that the great ones did
together. In the days gone by we grew sick, we endured torture, and we watched
as they slowly took what was ours. In the end, we were left in small camps,
with pieces of barren land, and left to worship one who we know only stories
of.”
A silent tear slowly slid down my cheek as I read from
behind the glass. I lifted my head, renewing the gaze with the pictures, and
belongings of my ancestors. In the end, we lost something that was always ours,
and they found what was never lost.
I love the figurative language and the imagery you use. I feel that you really capture the emotions of the Native Americans. Also, your writing is very visual. I think you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive piece. You did a really good job writing in first person as a Native American. I especially like the ending.
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